After much thought, my trip to the Lincon Park Zoo was fun, interesting and enjoyable. I did a lot of fun things and tried to be good. 
  One reason why it was fun is because we saw Loins, Tigers , Bears, Gorillas, Turtles and Snakes. Another reason why I had fun was because my Dad went with me on this trip and two of my friends were in my group.  
In addition, it was interesting because we could learn more about science. I also enjoyed seeing Zebras ,  cheetahs , Rhinos and Bats.
In conclusion I had fun going on a trip with my class and my Dad having a good time.